This story is fiction and it contains a scene of a parental spanking.  If such a subject is offensive, uninteresting or if you are a minor (i.e., child) please leave now.

Crimson Kid commented on my recent SSC05-04 story (version one below) noting that although I switched to a not-my-kink combination, F/gg, for me he would have liked a F/bb combination.  Well, that too would work (although not just with a simple gender swap).  He also noted how memorable the event would be.  Well, I considered all that and did a rewrite which is version two below.  Just transforming the boys into girls and vice versa would not make for a new read so I've changed a couple of other things.  I've also let it grow to some 750 words (the SSC limit is 500 words).  It would be hard to trim it down, so it is not an SSC entry.  Jump to version two.

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Party Poopers

By

YLeeCoyote@juno.com

Version One  (F/gg)

Nick was most happy that the rain stopped so that the lawn would be dry for his twelfth birthday party at noon tomorrow.  Neither his friends nor he cared about it being muddy but his father was very strict – spanking strict – about not playing on wet grass.  His kid sisters, twin brats, were scheduled to go with their friends that day.  Nick had happily been away for their tenth birthday party a few months earlier.

But it turned out that Kylee and Rene stayed home.  Their parents made them promised to leave the boys alone.  Things were going well at noon.  The boys were playing and dad was getting the barbeque going.

By 12:18 things had changed.  The sprinklers had been turned on.  Although dad immediately dashed for the valves it took a while to find the key that Kylee tossed into the bushes.  A few minutes were sufficient to render the lawn unusable with the ground previously soaked.  The girls were quickly caught by the pack of angry boys and rendered up for justice unharmed.

The boys really did not really care about getting a bit wet but the front lawn was much smaller and that restricted the games that they could play.© YLeeCoyote

The girls had erred and turned on two zones and thus had gotten soaked.  They were quite bedraggled by the time they looked up to a very irate mother standing on the porch while surrounded by a dozen boys fully expecting to see justice done – immediately.

The lecture was first and then girls had to climb the steps for their spanking.  To their horror, mother calmly pulled their wet T-shirts off and then their jeans along with their sneakers leaving them in just their soaked panties.

The girls begged but mother was not hearing their pleas.  They had not only significantly disrupted the party and been mean-spirited but they had also broken their promises.  Kylee was first.  Right after mother sat before flipping her over her lap she pulled down the wet panties.  Kylee did not like that at all although the boys were all smiling.  Nick especially because that is how he got spanked.  In a few short minutes, Kylee was bawling and had kicked her panties off.  She was told to face the wall while her sister got her spanking.  Soon there were two girls studying the wall with their hands on their heads and a dozen grinning boys admiring two cute red-hot little girl-bottoms.

That half hour seemed like an eternity to the two girls but the worst was yet to come.  Dressed just right for a birthday party, they had to stand on the porch and apologize to the boys.  It took them four tries before they did to their mother's satisfaction.  Then they were banished to their room and forbidden to turn anything on.

Nick saved some birthday cake for them even though he knew that they did not deserve any at all for it would earn him points with his parents.
 

Version Two  (F/bb)

Nickole along with her friends had made a decision.  Her's would be the last birthday party where they would be tomboys; they were all growing up and would be young ladies at Karen's party next month.  They were most clear to each other that this meant young ladies who really need bras and not prim super-saccharine Shirley Temples clones.

Nickole was happy that the rain stopped so that the lawn would be dry for her twelfth birthday party at noon tomorrow.  Neither her tomboy friends nor she cared about it being muddy but her father was very strict – spanking strict – about not playing on wet grass.  Her kid brothers, twin brats, were scheduled to be exiled, er,  go with their friends that day.  Nickole had happily been away for their gross tenth birthday party a few months earlier.

But it turned out that Kenny and Ricky stayed home.  Their parents made them promised to leave the girls alone or else!  Things were going well at noon.  The girls were playing and dad was getting the barbeque going.

By 12:18 things had changed.  The sprinklers had been turned on.  Although dad immediately dashed for the valves it took a while to find the key that Kenny tossed into the bushes.  A few minutes were sufficient to render the lawn unusable with the ground previously soaked.  The boys were quickly caught by the bevy of angry girls and rendered up for justice unharmed (except for their badly bruised egos).

The tomboys really did not really care about getting a bit wet but the front lawn was much smaller and that restricted the games that they could play.  It was also a matter of principal of kid brother brats verse big sister.  In addition, several girls were annoyed that they had to wipe their digital cameras dry.

The boys had erred and turned on two zones and thus had gotten themselves throughly soaked.  They were quite bedraggled by the time they looked up to a very irate mother standing on the porch while surrounded by a dozen girls fully expecting to see justice done – immediately.  Although father spanked harder, at least he would have not done it on the front porch and in front of that gaggle of giggling girls.

The lecture was first and then boys had to climb the gallows' steps for their spanking.  To their horror, mother calmly pulled their wet T-shirts off and then their shorts along with their sneakers leaving them in just their soaked superhero briefs.

The boys begged but their mother was not hearing their pleas.  They had not only significantly disrupted the party and been mean-spirited but they had also broken their promises.  If mother had been paying attention, she would have stopped the girls taking pictures but she was very intent on her role as prosecuting judge, jury and executioner.  Kenny was first.  Right after mother sat before flipping him over her lap she pulled down the wet briefs.  Kenny noticed the flash although his mother did not.  He did not like any of this at all although the girls were all smiling.  Nickole especially because that is how she got spanked.  In a few short minutes, Kenny was bawling and had kicked his briefs off.  Ricky now got his in the same way although Kenny had great trouble seeing it through his tear filled eyes.

Soon there were two boys studying the wall with their hands on their heads and a dozen grinning girls admiring two cute red-hot little boy-bottoms both live and on little lcd screens.

That half hour seemed like an eternity to the two boys but the worst was yet to come.  Dressed just right for a birthday party, they had to stand on the porch and apologize to the girls – their hands at their sides.  It took them four long drawn out tries before they did to their mother's satisfaction.  Then they were banished to their room and forbidden to turn anything on.  They were expected to contemplate their misbehavior confined in their cell until dinner time.

Nickole saved some birthday cake for them even though she knew that they did not deserve any at all for she knew it would earn her points with her parents.  She and her friends especially treasured the director's cut CD that they made of the party.  The general release edition shared with parents did not show the boys at all.  The private edition had many images of them well exposed with red cheeks both fore and aft.  They would remember this for a very long time.

The End

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